Kenpachi Masamune

Wow. I did not know I could speak so well. O.o; Though I have a feeling a lot of the stuff on YWS from the more serious people is 'trash' ...

Wow...this is just as bad as the 'i love me rooms' of many English houses and other forms of being downright pompous in the worse of ways. Though it was ...

Thank you for the review! Brother Povek makes his return after the congregation, he was not swiftly dealt with because of the rush to call the people from their work ...

You meant this to be in response to Chapter 2... As for the full moon, aside from the fact it is going to be light enough for her to make ...

Fian is the town in the Polek Mountains. Clausek is the eldest son of the Sevek family. He is fifteen years old. Belvil is a town that was on the ...

'freaking haiku' was better. At least people know what one is and it makes the joke easier to get. I don't know what you mean about 'syllables' those make up ...

No need to repost. Just edit your original here. The line: 'I dreamed my dreams were nightmares' is really more of needless repeating. Unless you want to stress the fact ...

Not exactly what I was going for. Just because she essentially whored herself to a guy for two months for a $1000 was a bet, that seems just plain weird. ...

A relationship should at least be introduced or give us enough background to understand why the break up is occurring at the least. Doing either of those will let us ...

Ooh-ohh! Someone taking a serious hammer to my work! Not to be critical of your review, but the point of this was a tell rather then show story. Much like ...

Very good. I liked how it was so emotionally deep and something so insignificant, but at the same time so beautiful because it is simple. A powerful poem and I ...

Quirky and mocking rhyme, but light and easy to read. I liked it, but there is not too much I can say about this. It was good.